Team Vocab

When it comes to the elections of this year many people can anticipate these two candidates to surely accuse each other from doings of the past. Each candidate tries to remain stolid but Hilary definitely out beats Trump. Its aggravating  because Trump and Hilary are constantly sticking their proboscis into everyone's business and venomously attacking each other. With each debate America is left suspended to watch the next one just to see the two yell at each other. Both candidates try to hypnotize the world into thinking their fit to be president trying to prove that they can transform this world into something greater, but they simply just illuminate each other's fault.

Today I'm a Good Human

       Today I'm a good human because I helped my mother take care of the kids and I also took my brothers to their soccer games. Anyway I feel that I'm a good human everyday sometimes it may be because I'm nice to someone or because when I listen to someone I have the impact of showing to them that I care when they're talking to me. I feel the qualities of being a good person is just showing someone that you care about them it may not be a big impact but what matters is that no matter how small it is can be the most effective.  So I ask myself why not be a good human everyday? ....... Maybe you will change someone's life!!!!

Literature Analysis #1  

Book: Lost & Found by: Sereena Iannatuonno

  Read: Prologue & Chapter 1

    1) In this book we see that the plot is about a teenage girl name " Georgia'' who was abused at home right when she got out from school and got kicked out of the house by her own mother. The effect was when she got kicked out and so beat up. She had bruises in her neck and her nose was almost broken, she had a black eye, because her mother almost kicked her to death she kick her twice in the head and three times in the stomach. The effect was that she got kicked out and she started working at a restaurant where these two mature boys realize that something was wrong with her so she waited until she got off work to follow her and he realize that she lived in  alley next to a garbage can & he offer Georgia for help and she didn't want to listen so they call their mom to come and pick her up but she didn't want to because she thought it was her mom but then she realize that she wasn't and when to stay when them at their house.
    2)   Theme of the novel: The theme of the novel is the opportunity of giving people chances and the pain of letting go of a bad memory.
   3) I think that the authors tone when she writes this book is the sense of being serious and upsetting. The reason for this is because:

•   " Answer me you goddamn b*tch!"  she slapped me on the face. I stumbled back into the door. God did I closed the living room door, how am I supposed to escape now." 
•   " Until you get it right, that's it." She let go of me and I tumbled to the floor.
•  " Since I'm a kind mother I'll give you a thousand dollars and I'll say goodbye to you Kind? She saying she's kind! She's kicking me out of the house, after she beat the shit out of me. " But-" I started to say but she slapped me in the face and kneed me in the stomach. No buts, do you understand? Now get to you goddamn room & start packing."

I think when the author wrote this she was serious thinking about this girls life she probably had the idea of writing this book by looking at the news by this situation or she probably read reports and created this book to let people know that being abused can affect someone let them know how it effects a person when they're abuse just like Georgia

 4) Figurative Devices:

1. " As I entered I see my mothers face super red holding something that she wasn't suppose to see"- Hyperbole  I know this because peoples faces don't look legit red as the color
2. " Big chocolate brown eyes, high cheek bones that always has a rosy hint of pink on them, nice dark long eyelashes, tan skin, wing long wavy dirty blond hair." - Simile because she's comparing her brown chocolate eyes with chocolate.

Literature Analysis #1  

Book: Lost & Found by: Sereena Iannatuonno

  Read: Prologue & Chapter 1

    1) In this book we see that the plot is about a teenage girl name " Georgia'' who was abused at home right when she got out from school and got kicked out of the house by her own mother. The effect was when she got kicked out and so beat up. She had bruises in her neck and her nose was almost broken, she had a black eye, because her mother almost kicked her to death she kick her twice in the head and three times in the stomach. The effect was that she got kicked out and she started working at a restaurant where these two mature boys realize that something was wrong with her so she waited until she got off work to follow her and he realize that she lived in  alley next to a garbage can & he offer Georgia for help and she didn't want to listen so they call their mom to come and pick her up but she didn't want to because she thought it was her mom but then she realize that she wasn't and when to stay when them at their house.
    2)   Theme of the novel: The theme of the novel is the opportunity of giving people chances and the pain of letting go of a bad memory.
   3) I think that the authors tone when she writes this book is the sense of being serious and upsetting. The reason for this is because:

•   " Answer me you goddamn b*tch!"  she slapped me on the face. I stumbled back into the door. God did I closed the living room door, how am I supposed to escape now." 
•   " Until you get it right, that's it." She let go of me and I tumbled to the floor.
•  " Since I'm a kind mother I'll give you a thousand dollars and I'll say goodbye to you Kind? She saying she's kind! She's kicking me out of the house, after she beat the shit out of me. " But-" I started to say but she slapped me in the face and kneed me in the stomach. No buts, do you understand? Now get to you goddamn room & start packing."

I think when the author wrote this she was serious thinking about this girls life she probably had the idea of writing this book by looking at the news by this situation or she probably read reports and created this book to let people know that being abused can affect someone let them know how it effects a person when they're abuse just like Georgia

 4) Figurative Devices:

1. " As I entered I see my mothers face super red holding something that she wasn't suppose to see"- Hyperbole  I know this because peoples faces don't look legit red as the color
2. " Big chocolate brown eyes, high cheek bones that always has a rosy hint of pink on them, nice dark long eyelashes, tan skin, wing long wavy dirty blond hair." - Simile because she's comparing her brown chocolate eyes with chocolate.

Mentor Letter Draft #1

Greetings My Yoda,
               Well Hello!! I hope everything is turning out great with all the amazing things that you have to do in your life but I have a great question that I have been having in mind. Is amazing how sometimes I just sit on a couch and stare at the ceiling and come up with the random questions ever but I do have one specific question in which I really could not get to the point is just like...How? Why?
            Anyway my question is about perfection in life. Why do people seem to want things perfect? Why is there one person who is perfect? This is really bugging me and I would want to know why people want things perfect.  Anyway I know you have experience with psychology and how the brain works and why people think that way so I was wondering if you can give me information and ideas on why people think that way.
- Why people want perfect?
- Why is there one person in life perfect?
             Please write back and Thank you and can wait to hear your ideas.
                                                                                                            Sincerely,
                                                                                                                 Samary Nava

Essay #1 revised

         What are we going to do without hugs? Hugs are the best gift ever!! Patriotism is a piece of love that people feel, for their country. In my opinion I agree with E.M. Foster opinion because personal relations are more important than patriotism. The reason why I agree with personal relations is for three good reasons, bonding, act of care for others. I think that these categories have to do with the importance of a hug and how a person feels and it’s good to identify what’s more important then what is not.

           Personal relations, is more important than a cause of patriotism because of human relationships we learn that the act of caring for one another and how to love is important. However, patriotism is caring for a country which is lack of compassion because its not going to show you how to love or how to care back.The use of language that is used between a personal relation is use to show a very powerful impact on a person life. The use of language shows the effective way on how to identify what’s going wrong, to show a problem of the situation the, act of happiness and the feeling to talk to someone. This shows reality due to the purpose of personal relations because it shows the impact of our lives and how it can affect you on the state of health and someone who doesn’t can get affected by frustration, depression, and so much negative impacts in their lives. The sense of having personal relations impacts a person to another person and shows the change in society, that’s why personal relations is more important than patriotism.

         In addition, my second purpose is bonding an impact with personal relations that show the sense of motivation and discipline. When we bond with others it shows the relation of a connection with another person because it shows how others can encourage one another. The reason for this is because when we have communications we tend to have a more positive outcome in our life’s. When we show that positive outcome we see the act of discipline that shows us was urgent versus what is important and the pathos of what personal relations does on a person. However, patriotism is more prohibited with words that has to do with society and the situations of a country sometimes it has to do with taboo language which really does not tend to communicate I also know that taboo language is very powerful but its more forbidden. I personally think that everyone should express themselves freely which shows how personal relations are very important. This shows the syllogism on why personal relations show the significance on why it matters and how I agree with Mr. Foster.

          My third purpose why I agree with Mr. Foster view is because personal relations shows priorities of care. In addition to this care is the idea of personal relation because it shows how we create reality to use our sense of words. The reason for this is because when we tend to care we use our knowledge of words to make someone feel better the interaction of trying to solve a problem or help them, just trying to make that one-person feelings get better. Unlike with patriotism we do show care for our country, but when we do all of it is just stress relief. I think that patriotism is just trying to make the country better but it does not show how important it is to make a person life a more positive environment. That’s why I think patriotism is not important because it doesn’t show the act of language and the importance of making an impact in someone’s life is just the care for a country to make the country a better place; this is why I agree with Mr. Foster that personal relations is more important.

          Lastly, I agree with Mr. Foster that personal relation is more important than patriotism because it shows the three reasons why personal relations is more important because of care, human relationships and bonding. It also emphasizes the idea of language and the use or words and how we develop that communication with others. I feel that the idea of being happy and full of love and trying to communicate is the idea of life.

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