A HUG IS NEARLY A GUN SPELLED BACKWARD
Prompt:
Agree or disagree with E.M. Forster's view that
personal relations are more important than causes or patriotism.
We nearly think hugs is a sense of
happiness, love and care for others or something. When we think of patriotism
is a piece of love that people feel, for their country. In my opinion I agree
with E.M Foster opinion because personal relations are more important than
patriotism. The reason why I agree with personal relations; is for these three
reasons human relationships, bonding, and the act of caring for others. I think
that these categories have to do with the importance of a hug and how a person
feels and it’s good to identify what’s more important then what is not.
One of my reasons that personal
relations, is more important than a cause of patriotism because of human
relationships we learn that the act of caring for one another and how to love is
more important. Unlike patriotism is caring for their own country is a lack of
compassion because it’s not going to show you how to love or how to care back. The
use of language that is used between a personal relation is use to show a very
powerful impact on a person life. The use of language shows the effective way
on how to identify what’s going wrong, to show a problem of the situation the,
act of happiness and the feeling to talk to someone. This shows reality due to
the purpose of personal relations because it shows the impact of our lives and
how it can affect you on the state of health and someone who doesn’t can get
affected by frustration, depression, and so much negative impacts in their
lives. The sense of having personal relations impacts a person to another
person and shows the change in society, that’s why personal relations is more
important than patriotism.
In addition, my second purpose is
bonding an impact with personal relations that show the sense of motivation and
discipline. When we bond with others it shows the relation of a connection with
another person because it shows how others can encourage one another. The
reason for this is because when we have communications we tend to have a more positive
outcome in our life’s. When we show that positive outcome we see the act of discipline
that shows us was urgent versus what is important and the pathos of what
personal relations does on a person. However, patriotism is more prohibited
with words that has to do with society and the situations of a country
sometimes it has to do with taboo language which really does not tend to communicate
I also know that taboo language is very powerful but its more forbidden. I
personally think that everyone should express themselves freely which shows how
personal relations are very important. This shows the syllogism on why personal
relations show the significance on why it matters and how I agree with Mr.
Foster.
My third purpose why I agree with Mr.
Foster view is because personal relations shows priorities of care. In addition
to this care is the idea of personal relation because it shows how we create
reality to use our sense of words. The reason for this is because when we tend
to care we use our knowledge of words to make someone feel better the interaction
of trying to solve a problem or help them, just trying to make that one-person
feelings get better. Unlike with patriotism we do show care for our country,
but when we do all of it is just stress relief. I think that patriotism is just
trying to make the country better but it does not show how important it is to
make a person life a more positive environment. That’s why I think patriotism
is not important because it doesn’t show the act of language and the importance
of making an impact in someone’s life is just the care for a country to make
the country a better place; this is why I agree with Mr. Foster that personal
relations is more important.
Lastly, I agree with Mr. Foster
that personal relation is more important than patriotism because it shows the
three reasons why personal relations is more important because of care, human
relationships and bonding. It also emphasizes the idea of language and the use
or words and how we develop that communication with others. I feel that the
idea of being happy and full of love and trying to communicate is the idea of life.
You have a great thesis statement because its straight to the point. I think you can do better on your hook. You have long and meaningful sentences, but use commas more. Your essay is well organized. Overall, great essay!
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Deletei think the beginning needs a better hook but i like how you overall organized the essay into paragraphs that are easy to read and understand your point��
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