Essay #1 revised

         What are we going to do without hugs? Hugs are the best gift ever!! Patriotism is a piece of love that people feel, for their country. In my opinion I agree with E.M. Foster opinion because personal relations are more important than patriotism. The reason why I agree with personal relations is for three good reasons, bonding, act of care for others. I think that these categories have to do with the importance of a hug and how a person feels and it’s good to identify what’s more important then what is not.

           Personal relations, is more important than a cause of patriotism because of human relationships we learn that the act of caring for one another and how to love is important. However, patriotism is caring for a country which is lack of compassion because its not going to show you how to love or how to care back.The use of language that is used between a personal relation is use to show a very powerful impact on a person life. The use of language shows the effective way on how to identify what’s going wrong, to show a problem of the situation the, act of happiness and the feeling to talk to someone. This shows reality due to the purpose of personal relations because it shows the impact of our lives and how it can affect you on the state of health and someone who doesn’t can get affected by frustration, depression, and so much negative impacts in their lives. The sense of having personal relations impacts a person to another person and shows the change in society, that’s why personal relations is more important than patriotism.

         In addition, my second purpose is bonding an impact with personal relations that show the sense of motivation and discipline. When we bond with others it shows the relation of a connection with another person because it shows how others can encourage one another. The reason for this is because when we have communications we tend to have a more positive outcome in our life’s. When we show that positive outcome we see the act of discipline that shows us was urgent versus what is important and the pathos of what personal relations does on a person. However, patriotism is more prohibited with words that has to do with society and the situations of a country sometimes it has to do with taboo language which really does not tend to communicate I also know that taboo language is very powerful but its more forbidden. I personally think that everyone should express themselves freely which shows how personal relations are very important. This shows the syllogism on why personal relations show the significance on why it matters and how I agree with Mr. Foster.

          My third purpose why I agree with Mr. Foster view is because personal relations shows priorities of care. In addition to this care is the idea of personal relation because it shows how we create reality to use our sense of words. The reason for this is because when we tend to care we use our knowledge of words to make someone feel better the interaction of trying to solve a problem or help them, just trying to make that one-person feelings get better. Unlike with patriotism we do show care for our country, but when we do all of it is just stress relief. I think that patriotism is just trying to make the country better but it does not show how important it is to make a person life a more positive environment. That’s why I think patriotism is not important because it doesn’t show the act of language and the importance of making an impact in someone’s life is just the care for a country to make the country a better place; this is why I agree with Mr. Foster that personal relations is more important.

          Lastly, I agree with Mr. Foster that personal relation is more important than patriotism because it shows the three reasons why personal relations is more important because of care, human relationships and bonding. It also emphasizes the idea of language and the use or words and how we develop that communication with others. I feel that the idea of being happy and full of love and trying to communicate is the idea of life.